Friday, 25 August 2017

my most powerful sentence

This we have been watch black face and wrote story from it this is my most powerful sentence
The monkey felt embarrassed, tormented and defeated.

Thursday, 6 July 2017

My writing

Walt to use smiles in our writing.this week we have been learning to put smiles in our writing to make it interesting.we learned this with google docs.I enjoyed finding similes to put in my writing.I found it challenging to find a picture to write about it.

                         My Writing

I Hear creaking noises as I crept across the brown dirty floor.
I heard the seagull chirping like a car horn!
I saw Seagull silhouette through the dark tinted windows.
I saw red rugged  rocky bricks.
I saw rotating wood as I walked up the stairs.
I felt If I stept on wrong creaky floor boards I would fall to my death!
I felt my leg shaking like wobbly jelly!
I felt like my eyes were glued to the wall of the disgusting house.
I wondered will I survive this adventure?
I wondered will I see my family again?

emoji My term 2 Reflection

Walt writes a reflection about the whole term.
This term I am proud of my writing skills because I'm getting better at writing neater in my writing book.I thought camp was fun because we went hut building, river crossing and on other fun walks.My most challenging were remembering cyber smart information from last year.

My Emoji
My sparkles on my hair mean my hair means I am lovely,  my princess Tiara mean I'm my dad's little princess.2017 is for the year.Toni is a shorter version of me. My bright smile is because I love school.

Wednesday, 28 June 2017

matariki sisters

Walt learn more about Matariki and the seven sisters.This week i have been learning about the seven sisters.I learned this on google slides and in some books.I enjoyed finding pictures for the backgrounds.I hope you enjoy my post.

Thursday, 22 June 2017

The plane crash

Walt use similes and alliteration in our writing This week we have been learning to use similes and alliteration. we learnt this with a show and tell template. I enjoyed choosing the music on spark.hope you enjoy my post.

Thursday, 15 June 2017

my writing on spark.abobe

WALT use spark.abobe to make videos.this week we have been learning how to use spark.abobe on our computer.We learned how to do this on spark.abobe.I enjoyed putting my writing in the slides.I hope you like my post


WALT describe what a simile is.this week we have been learning how to do similes.we learned this so we can put simlies in our writing.we learned this on enjoyed learning how to use

Tuesday, 13 June 2017

right place ,Right time,online

WALT be at the right place at right time online This week we have been learning to be in the right place at the right time.We learned this because this poster will give us a positive footprint. I learned this on Google drawings.I found it challenging to find a background picture.I enjoyed finding the computer picture.To be BTB I need to put capital letters at the start of my sentence.I hope you enjoy my post. 

Friday, 9 June 2017

my writing

WALT write a piece of persuasive writing.this week we have been learning to write a piece of persuasive writing.I learned this on google slides.I learned this because I didn't know how to do persuasive writing. I found it challenging to find what my ideas should be about.

I believe that everybody should recycle now and in the future.Would you wonder what new Zealand would look like if we recycle more?

My most important reason is that if you don’t recycle your rubbish you would pullet rivers. If the river was a clean water for us to drink then the water would be dirty and we could not drink it. We could get sick from the polluted water. Fish could get poisoned by the rubbish so our food supply would be lost.Another point when you recycle your rubbish gets make into something new.It’s like giving your rubbish a new chance at life.would you want an another chance at life?your notebook paper gets made into toilet paper, new computer paper and facial tissues.Isn’t that cool?
Finally, we should recycle because rubbish gets into the sea and could kill or harm animals.I researched and I found when  you put a plastic bag in the water you are harming a whale, whales think plastic bags are fish so they eat them then later on they die so now we know we’re harming a whale when we put a plastic bags in the sea
Those are my reason why new Zealand should recycle. Do you now think we should recycle?
I hope you like my post.

Friday, 26 May 2017

adding up to 20

WALT add up to 20.This week we have been learning to add up to 20.I enjoyed doing the maths buddy lesson.I learned this so I can teach other people.I also learned this from math buddy.

Tuesday, 23 May 2017

walt teach others how to embed a video.this week we have been doing how to teach others how to embed a slidle.I enjoyed doing the backgrounds.we leared this so we can help other people with this.I hope you like my post

Monday, 22 May 2017

my blog post video

WALT teach others how to embed a we have been learning to teach other people how to put your video on your blog. I found it challenging to do a slide with Frazer.   I enjoyed doing background on the slide.I learned this last year so  I made it stepping up.we learned this so we can show other how to do this.To be BTB I can put the camera at the right place .hope you like my post.

Monday, 15 May 2017

Giving directions

WALT give directions in math buddy.
This week we have been learning to give directions.I have been learning this so I can give direction to people and directions to places.I've been learning this on maths buddy.  I enjoyed doing the lesson on math buddy.  To make my work BTB I could talk louder.

Monday, 1 May 2017

My stepping up blog post cheeklist

WALT write a stepping up blog post. This week we have been trying to step up with our blog posts. we have learned how to do a stepping blog post so we can make our posts btb. miss Hofman helped us by reminding us about how this year we were doing cyber smart stepping up and last year we were doing cyber smart beginners. My next step is to do capital letters at the start of a sentence.

Thursday, 13 April 2017

My awesome verbs

WALT use verbs.This week we were finding verbs to put in our instructions, my verbs are in category, my categories are movement, voice, emotions and baking    I love verbs they make your sentences and instructions great, I hope you love my poster.

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

My Amazing instructions

WALT: Write clear instructions which explain exactly what to do and when.This week and last week we were writing instructions are that we can share with other people in room 5 and instrutions are about how to turn a bad puppy intoa good puppy hope enjoy my post.

Tuesday, 28 March 2017

My fabulos character web

WALT identify and describe the main characters in the book.  This week for reading our group has been reading a story called Hot Plasma on the Rocks.  Our first activity was about finding the main character in the story.  I thought Nat was the main character so I wrote facts about him to explain the type of character that he is.  I had to use the story to find the information.  I liked how it was challenging to find a picture of a robot.  I hope you enjoy my writing about my character.  

Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Character web - Mr Stink

WALT identify and describe the main character in the book. I liked how it was challenging to find a picture of Mr. Stink I enjoyed writing about Mr. Stink and what type of person he is. I hope you like my character web

Monday, 20 March 2017

My amazing top tip

WALT make a top tip to show the year 4s.My top tip is how to insert a video onto a slide.It was challenging to chose a tip to do because there are so many good ones to do. It took about one day to do the slide and one day to do a dlo. 

Thursday, 9 March 2017

Camp Reflection

WALT is to retell our camp experience I had a great time on and hope you will know some funny things on camp My next step is to make the writing all the same size