Thursday, 15 June 2017

my writing on spark.abobe

WALT use spark.abobe to make videos.this week we have been learning how to use spark.abobe on our computer.We learned how to do this on spark.abobe.I enjoyed putting my writing in the slides.I hope you like my post

1 comment:

  1. Hi Antonia.

    Thank you very much for sending me the link to your writing; I really enjoyed reading it. I especially enjoyed your descriptive language - I smiled as I saw you at the window, looking out of the curtain watching the veins of the lightening crossing the sky.

    However, just one comment: before you publish your work, it makes good sense to read it over as I noticed there was a sentence that didn't quite make sense.

    Overall thought, fantastic use of descriptive language and thoroughly enjoyable to read.

    Keep it up. Good work.



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