Thursday, 22 June 2017

The plane crash

Walt use similes and alliteration in our writing This week we have been learning to use similes and alliteration. we learnt this with a show and tell template. I enjoyed choosing the music on spark.hope you enjoy my post.

1 comment:

  1. Some great words there Antonia.

    Great imagery.

    Again; please read it again later to make sure your spelling is correct and it makes sense.

    Overall - excellent.


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