Thursday, 6 July 2017

My writing

Walt to use smiles in our writing.this week we have been learning to put smiles in our writing to make it interesting.we learned this with google docs.I enjoyed finding similes to put in my writing.I found it challenging to find a picture to write about it.

                         My Writing

I Hear creaking noises as I crept across the brown dirty floor.
I heard the seagull chirping like a car horn!
I saw Seagull silhouette through the dark tinted windows.
I saw red rugged  rocky bricks.
I saw rotating wood as I walked up the stairs.
I felt If I stept on wrong creaky floor boards I would fall to my death!
I felt my leg shaking like wobbly jelly!
I felt like my eyes were glued to the wall of the disgusting house.
I wondered will I survive this adventure?
I wondered will I see my family again?

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